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SEXY PARAGRAPHS

This is my writing about sexy paragraphs.We Had to write two paragraphs about how boys are better then girls .Sexy stands for.

S-State your idea

E-Explain your statement

X-Provide an Xample

Y-Why is this statement or idea important-Why have you included it?

(BLACK HAT)-How i can improve next time is by trying to add more examples.This is important because when some one is reading your story about how boys are better then girls you want to put a good example so that they believe that boys are better then girls.

(YELLOW HAT)-The thing I done the best in my writing was make it tidy and  it all made sense.making sense is important because if someone is reading your story and it doesn’t make sense they wont understand but if it does make sense they would under stand it would like to read it.

INFORMAL AND FORMAL WRITING.

This is my formal and informal writing .we had to write one paragraph about formal writing and another paragraph about informal writing’s chose to do mine on having to write a story.

WALT: know the difference between informal and formal writing.

BLACK HAT-How I can improve next time is to try make it more descriptive .making it more descriptive is important so that you hook the person reading my story in.

YELLOW HAT-the thing i done best was make sure every thing made good sense. This is important so that when someone reads your story they can under stand what they are reading.

Holiday Writing.

Going to the beach.

This is my writing that describes seeing a seal and having a good feed.

BLACK HAT-The thing I can improve on next time in my writing  is adding more five senses.This is important so that when some one is reading your story they get a good picture in there head what you are writing about.

YELLOW HAT-What I have done really well this week in writing is the editing. because I went through the story added more 5 senses and made every thing  make sense.

This is a story about Tigers its descriptive writing about what Tigers are,where they live and what they eat.

(YELLOW HAT) What I think I have done really well is put lots of descriptive words in my story.

(BLACK HAT) What I think I can improve on next time is try to make it more tidy and to not get as many words spelt wrong.

This week I’m doing my WOW on my descriptive writing .The reason why I picked my descriptive writing is because I think I done really well and because Mr C told me to. How I can improve next time is by making sure it is more tidy and easy to read.

This week I’m doing my WOW on my report writing.The reason why i picked report writing is because its about pins and needles and me and Cody spent a lot of time learning about pins and needles in theme so it was really easy.How I can improve on my report writing next time is by picking a topic that I don’t no allot about so I learn allot more.

My WOW  this week is my swimming goal. My

swimming goal is is to make sure I take a breath

every four strokes.The reason why I picked this

goal because when  I swim I take a breath about

7 strokes.

This week I’m doing my wow on my basic facts test.The reason why i picked my basic facts test because i bet my last record last time i got 99/100 and this week i got 100/100.What i could do better next week is make it tidier so the person who’s marking it can see it better.